Thursday, 15 January 2015

Presentation script

Mat Leatherbarrow: Our show is called "your entertainment", There are going to be three different segments covering the areas of music, film and gaming. There is going to be one VT for the film section which is going to be an interview with a film expert talking about a specific film, one VT for the gaming section which is going to be a 60 second review of a newly released game. The last VT is for the music section and were going to look at part of a music video that is in the headlines and possibly causing controversy and discuss it.

Bilal: Our target audience will be a varied range of ages and genders certain parts of the news show will be more specific to certain ages or genders, But overall we are going to targeting younger people of both genders there are going to be two presenters one male and one female this mix helps be to appeal to all genders.

Jamie: The genre of the show is a hybrid news show because its is a mix of different topics. (Gaming, Film and Music.) The style is informal this is demonstrated by the two hosts being around the same age of the target audience, the dialogue will be more bubbly instead of serious.

Jess: This also appeals to our target audience because they don't tend to watch formal serious news programmes such as the BBC News. Look at the chart on the board, you can clearly see that it shows more 35 and overs watch BBC news than people younger than 35.

Vicky: People will enjoy watching our programme because there are many different aspects to the show that will appeal to a wide audience. For example. The films that we are going to be reviewing are more tailored towards boys.

Matt King Our theme will be set in studio with two presenters at each side of the desk, the desk will obviously not say Bookwork Corner, we will either paint over or cover it up with a black cloth or sugar paper. 

Freddie: We will have a green screen behind them with graphics on. For each Segment we do we will have props that match the theme of the category for example when we are talking about music we will have two guitars on either side of the desk, when talking about gaming we will have xbox controllers on the desk and when talking about film we'll have cameras on the desk, also on the desk we will have a cups and a laptop just to make it look more professional. 

Alex: The thing that makes our show different and fun to watch the fact that it is very diverse and covers many different topics. It has something for everyone. Also the 60 second review of gaming is kind of like a game in itself which relates to the. The interview with a film expert. We think the content in our show will not only entertain our audience but it will also attract more people to watch it because of the fact that it's so diverse.

Arran: The cast and crew that we need will be, 2 bubbly, confident presenters. Two vision mixers, A sound person and three camera men. The props that we need are two guitars, two gaming consoles and two film cameras. 

Tuesday, 13 January 2015

News: What is it?


  • Information
  • Learning
  • Important events
  • Formal or informal - For example the 10 o'clock news. Informal - This Morning, Celebrity news, MTV news. Why do people show news in an informal way? The demographic of the channel is younger
  • Television, News Papers, Radio, Family members, Internet. 
  • Dull
  • Gossip
  • Knowledge 
  • Factual information 
  • Accessible everywhere - lots of different ways that you can consume it

Schools news story becomes news if:

It can affect you this is why it's important. Relevant or affect you. They are creating an element of panic. 

Nuclear why is this news:

  • Cause they are a big company. 
  • Got taken money off of them. (9 billion) 
  • It's news cause it's about money. Outrage. 
  • Nuclear energy is big/important. 
  • Creating a sense of panic. 
  • Local news - relevant news. 

Video of paris gunman raises questions of affiliations. Relevant cause it's in Europe. It creates panic and upset cause it was a mass terrorist attack. 
MI5 chief warns al Qaeda in Syria planning mass attacks on West. Creates panic and alerts people in the UK. It's relevant to people in the UK. 
UK report on Libyan troop sex attacks says security was inadequate. Creates panic. It's local. 'Sex attacks' and 'Rape' gets your attention. 
Up to 70k homes without power as storms hit Britain.  It could affect you. Or the elderly. It's as close as Scotland. 


  • Shia La Beouf mental breakdown at berlin film festival. 
  • Shia La Beouf is not famous anymore

Tuesday, 6 January 2015

Unit 23/4 assignment 2 (Individual proposal 2)

Topic/Issue: Gaming news show informing people of gaming news. Shot in a formal type way, talking about big gaming news stories from the week. Focusing on new games coming out, updates in existing games, and also business gaming news. (E.G this person bought this game from this other person) My hope for this programme is that people can be educated about the business side of gaming as well as just knowing what games are coming out and what updates are coming out within those games. I hope that this programme will inform them on the business side of gaming in a fun and interesting way. I also hope that maybe in the programme there will be an audience participation type of segment where people can go online and either tweet with a specific hash-tag giving their input on the show or they have a website where people can comment and they will reply to certain comments/tweets in the next show. 

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Research the target audience: My idea is taking bits from an online web show. 'The Patch' and 'The Know'. The kinds of people that watch that are ages from about 15+ to any ages after that up till about 50 years old. I know that my idea would be popular with said ages because the viewing figures are from all of those ages. Also it would be popular with a wide spectrum of people regardless of race, gender or age because certain demographics show that there's an equal percentage in peoples ages who play games if the ages are split into 3 groups. Under 18's, 18-35's and 36+ (see diagram below) I'll mainly be targeting 63% of my audience (The under 18's and 18-35 years) because the average game player age is 30.

(Source: X)


Constraints: The constraints might by trying to find a way to talk about business gaming news in an entertaining way, we need to be able to find energetic hosts that can carry the show and make it flow nice. If not then the show will just be boring and not enjoyable to watch. I'll overcome this by maybe auditioning hosts.


Genre: The type of programme I'm making is an informative, fun news programme. Typical conventions of an informative, fun news gaming programme are :

  • Brightly coloured set. 
  • Quite lively hosts. 
  • The camera is usually quite free and moves around with the characters, although I think my camera will be stationary as the hosts are presenting to the audience, either that or they'll turn to one camera and then it cuts to them as they face another camera. 
  • Sarcasm when the host is speaking seen as this is a news show.

In mine we'll get the hosts being quite opinionated, basically playing off what the other person says.


Guests/Crew needed Make a list of people you will need in the studio (presenter, participants, vision mixer, camera operators, number of microphones) What sort of people would you need to be in the programme?

Guests/Crew needed: 

  • Presenter (two)
  • Vision mixer
  • Camera operators
  • Two mics
  • Sound
I would need two sarcastic naturally funny presenter(s) 

VT Needed: People are doing timed 60 second reviews of games. They have to review everything they know about a game (their opinions) hitting key points within the time slot. 

Outline structure:

  • Introduction "Hello and welcome to _______ my name is _____ and this week ______
  • Jump into the first gaming news story make sarcastic comment talk to the camera maybe rhetorical questions, give their opinion on the news story. 
  • Turn to the next camera talk about another gaming news story maybe show a clip of said news story. 
  • Turn to the next camera talk about the last news story, more sarcasm, funny humour etc.
  • Maybe review a game
  • Show what people have said about the show in the past week (Comment on comments basically.)
  • Exit, "This has been _____ with me ______ good bye and see you next week"

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The Improbable dream to radically transform online gaming (X)

Wednesday, 10 December 2014

Unit 24 Assignment 1 - Podcast

LINK TO PODCAST: https://soundcloud.com/user674839343/writing-podcast/s-NUSex


This podcast is all about screen writing and how you become a writer. I'll be answering a lot of questions that will probably help you out.

1. How do you become a writer & what is it like to work as one

You can take classes to learn the 'craft' but really to get better at writing you just write. A quote from 'Stephen Davis who is a freelance screenwriter: The cliche is true: The more you write the better you get" You need to learn to accept criticism. Working as a writer is very temperamental a lot of people get side jobs like waitressing for example, to be able to support themselves. It will help you out a lot in writing if you know a lot of people. Agents, Producters etc etc. Writing is super hard to get into, you often need entry level jobs, for example a staff writer,

2. What is a staff writer?

  • Staff writer: Break down scrips, develop plot points, flesh out characters. Working with other writers, bouncing ideas off each other. May participate in first reads and rehearsals with the cast  to take notes and make necessary changes to scenes that aren't playing well. Staff writer does not write the episodes but they have some input into the final shooting script. This is valuable experience for them. 

3. What is the commissioning process? How do you get an idea commissioned

To get commissioned you need to get hired by a producer or a production company. You would still usually need to be represented by an agent to be taken seriously. When you send your script in a script reader will read the first ten pages. They will then either decide whether to throw your script away or go onto the next stage where someone will read your screenplay through. All of it. Not just the first ten pages. If they get all the way through then you will be invited to a script development meeting where they talk about the development of your script. Then they will enter the stage of the rewrites. They will work on your script and say things like "I think there needs to be more guns" or something along those lines. Basically just changing your script so that it'll slot nicely into the TV programmes that are currently changing.

How BBC do it: The have a submission link on their website where members of the public and credited writers can submit their scripts. They will look at your idea by genre first, then they may ask you to develop your idea further. When it's ready they'll take it to the channel controller. The dialogue of the show will grow and change. It will also be managed by the channel and genre commissioning editor.

ITV you email them your idea, but they only take it from production companies. Not the general public. Then they go through the same process as the BBC

4. Why do you need an agent, names of scriptwriter agents. 

You need your agent to help you with the contract. They will help you negotiate your contract and get you a better deal than your last quote. They want to help you to make sure you're not getting screwed over. Agent names: Laya Gelff Agency, Stuart M. Miller, Susan Smith Company. 

5.  How DOES A SCRIPT GET CHOSEN.

When a script gets chosen there is period of time that always happens before it can be made. It's called the "option period" during this time something called the "option agreement" is wrote up giving the rights to said script to the production company that bought it. Then you will be made a purchase price on your script in the form of a contract. Never negotiate the script on your own terms. Always get an agent to do it.  This is why you need a reputable agent. If the project gets green lighted then you get the money and the film starts being made. If not all the rights revert back to you and no one lost any money. You can then chose to option your script to another producer if you'd like.

6.   How does a script writer get payed

A script writer gets payed weekly but you get contracted for a certain number of episodes. There is a Writers guild association that establishes minimum payments that a writer must be payed. The more work a writer is guaranteed the less the studio pays. When a salaried writer writes an actual script, they also get payed for that script on top of the already there weekly minimum pay from the WGA

7.  What legal issues do you have to worry about as a writer.

The words plagiarism is taking someone else's work or words and claiming it as your own. Libel (Lie-Bull) is making false accusations about someone that is damaging to their reputation.

Writers have to be aware of copyright. If you don't copyright your idea then other people could just say that they came up with it with no legal issues. If someone is making an adaptation of something (Like they're making a book into a film) not only will you need to get the rights from the author or publisher of said book, but if the book was wrote 2nd August 1989 Moral rights will apply to the author too. You would have to make sure that they have waved these moral rights.

8. Here are some examples of court cases

Two women are suing the writers of new girl for stealing the show idea from their television script. The lawsuit claims independent producer, Holly Harter, reviewed the script and advised the writers it would work better as a film. The women allegedly shopped around a rewrite in 2006.  They even said that they suggested Zoey Dechenel for the lead role but the producer didn't know who she was. Then apparently the script made a breakthrough with WWE and then their attitudes change towards them and they had trouble getting their phone calls returned. They claim this is when their stolen script started development.

Much calmer and nicer court case apparently the idea for the film terminator was stolen from a famed writer called Ellison. Ellison said it borrowed heavily from his script "Soldier" He eventually received a settlement and an acknowledgement in the movie.

In my opinion there are a lot of high and low points of being a writer.

The high points of working as a writer is being able to see your idea on the screen and having that exciting process from script to scene. You get to be super creative and think out side of the box. You get to do what you love for a living. You get paid highly if you make it. But on the other side you do have to face a lot of rejection and people changing your script so that it's barely recognisable anymore. 

Sunday, 7 December 2014

Unit 32 Assignment 2 - Storyboard

 
Then the ITV music logo sweeps on screen and ends the episode 
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People are arguing                            Woman comes to film it               They get angry at her for film-
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One of them smacks the camera (but it's now a first person shot of the camera)


The logo sweeps up on screen when the camera is smacked
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The scene starts out in an empty       The word music starts to be spelled out using album covers one
field, birds eye view of an empty      by one as the countdown theme track is playing. 
space


Once the word 'music' has been spelt out using album covers, the logo is complete as 'ITV' sweeps on screen above the word music. A voice over is heard throughout explaining what's on next.